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*1*
行く年や机の上に本の山
yuku toshi ya tukue no ue ni hon no yama
the passing year-
a mountain of books on my desk.

*2*
粥の湯気めがねに白い世界かな
kayu no yuge megane ni shiroi sekai kana
steaming hot porridge-
through the glasses
a white world!

*3*
寄せ鍋の箸合戦を遊びけり
yosenabe no hashi gassen wo asobi keri
steamboat-
we spar with chopsticks.

*4*
夜通しに唄ういびきと隙間風
yodooshi ni utau ibiki to sukima kaze
singing through the night,
the wind through that window seam
and his snore.

*5*
残月やかみの白きにすみのあと
zangetu ya kami no shiroki ni sumi no ato
the remnant of moon-
traces of ink on pale white paper.

OR

the remnant of moon-
silver hair stranded behind a corner.

*6*
北風や夜空をのぞく室の花
kita kaze ya yozora wo nozoku muro no hana
the north wind-
an indoor blossom peeks
at the night sky.

*7*
北向きの頬の痺れやモンスーン
kitamuki no hoo no shibire ya monsuun
a numbness on the north-facing cheek-
monsoon wind.

*8*
東屋の廂に掛かる寒の月
azumaya no hisashi ni kakaru kan no tuki
poised on the eave of a gazebo-
the cold moon.

*9*
十四日がんがん響く獅子の舞
juuyokka gangan hibiku shishi no mai
on the fourteenth day,
the head-throbbing lion dance.

*10*
元宵の月の明かりや赤いばな
genshou no tuki no akari ya akai bana
oh how bright
is the first full moon
and my red nose!

*11*
片隅に秘かな園や塵光る
katasumi ni hisoka na sono ya chiri hikaru
'the secret garden' in a corner-
bright specks of dust.

*12*
夜の猫や倒れたみかんの金字塔
yo no neko ya taoreta mikan no kinjitou
nocturnal cats-
a razed pyramid
of tangerines.

*13*
月冴えたガラスに映るはげのつや
tuki saeta garasu ni uturu hage no tuya
a clear crystal moon-
the reflection of a lustrous bald head on the glass.

*14*
冬という季節は朝の二十二度
fuyu toiu kisetu wa asa no nijuuni do
we call this season 'winter':
22°C in the morning.

*15*
ふわふわと水梅の香や朝の凪
fuwa fuwa to suibai no ka ya asa no nagi
the weightless scent of wrightia drifts
in the morning calm.

*16*
のらくらや俳句代わりにおおかみを
norakura ya haiku kawari ni ookami wo
slacking,
instead of writing haiku
i draw wolves.

*17*
鼻水も涙も出せるラクサかな
hanamizu mo namida mo daseru rakusa kana
with snivels and tears,
oh laksa!

*18*
劇場や化粧崩れたお嬢さん
gekijou ya keshou kuzureta ojousan
drama theatre-
the lady's make-up is in a mess.

*19*
帰り時に重いまぶたやおぼろ月
kaeriji ni omoi mabuta ya oborotuki
going home with heavy eyelids-
a fuzzy moon.

*20*
虎猫のけんかの相手ぬいぐるみ
toraneko no kenka no aite nuigurumi
the tiger cat wrestles
with a stuff toy.

*21*
コーヒーを飲む八人や星の空
koohii wo nomu hachi nin ya hoshi no sora
eight souls sipping coffee,
a starry heaven.

*22*
片道や赤花を散るにわか雨
kata michi ya akabana wo chiru niwaka ame
one way street-
red flowers littered by a sudden rain.

*23*
黒猫の銀の輪郭光けり
kuroneko no gin no rinkaku hikarikeri
the black cat's silver silhouette
glows.

*24*
夕食や足にぐるぐる猫三匹
yuushoku ya ashi ni guruguru neko sanpiki
dinnertime-
three cats wheeling round and round my legs.

*25*
赤々と鼻の真中にニキビかな
aka aka to hana no manaka ni nikibi kana
right in the middle of her nose,
a fiery red pimple.

*26*
梅つ月ながめの空や空の日記
umetutuki nagame no sora ya kara no niki
the sky persistently rains
in the second lunar month-
a blank diary.

OR

the second lunar month,
i gaze at the distant sky-
a blank diary.

*27*
野良猫のピカピカの目や鳩の群れ
noraneko no pika pika no me ya hato no mure
the stray cat's sparkling eyes-
a herd of pigeons.

*28*
雨雲はあの尖塔を触りけり
amagumo wa ano sentou wo sawari keri
the rain clouds
graze against that spire.

*0*
it is a well known fact that we do not have winter in singapore, even though my friend ~KorpiHunaja had managed to churn out 'snow in singapore' and even got a DD with that. :XD:

this round of haikuwrimo will be tough for me. but i've found a number of winter kigo that work in our context. let's hope i can still survive this mania like the past three years and successfully convey a so-called wintery atmostphere of this place so near the equator.

let's enjoy the strenuous haikuwrimo exercise together! :D

preview stamp by `RetroZombie and `jade-pandora.

NB:
day 3: steamboat info
day 5: kami is a kakekotoba or a pun, it can mean either ' paper' or 'hair'. sumi no ato can also be translated in two ways as shown in the submitted haiku proper.
day 9: fourteenth day of the first chinese lunar month, lion dance is a part of new year celebration.
day 10: genshou is the 15th day of the first chinese lunar month, the end of a whole series of new year celebrations. traditionally, chinese people go moon-watching and have fun with guessing riddles written on lit lanterns.
akai hana means red nose or red flower, whichever way you might perceive it.
day 11: 'the secret garden' is a classic english novel by frances hodgson burnett.
day 15: suibai or wrightia religiosa
day 16: i draw wolves. :P
day 17: laksa info
out of town on day 20 and 21, daily haiku will be delayed.
day 26: i managed to catch up! nagame means ' persistent rain' or 'gazing in a distance', it is another kakekotoba.

:boogie:HOORAY:boogie: on completion of another haikuwrimo!
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buglc Featured By Owner May 30, 2009   Writer
Awesome collection. I like the angles you're viewing from. I was hooked after the white world of porridge :)
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Itti Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
I really like number 2! Also the second version of 5.
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Bogbrush Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2009
I love how you've captured a lot of winter even at 22 degrees C! :) I reckon it must be the colds, pimples and clear moons.

A beautiful read, perfect with a relaxing cup of tea :)
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moyanII Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
thank you for your support, always. :)
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AbCat Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2009   Writer
Thank you for submitting all these and finish the wrimo. I'm still stuck on 16, but I'm determined to complete my collection, even if it will be the middle of March by the time it's finished.

I like how despite there being no snow to speak of in Singapore, that you've managed to give a wintery feel in so many of these with kigo and other allusions. You mentioned that in your comments as an intention of the collection and you have succeded for sure.

If I was to be finickety, I'd say that some of these are screaming out for a second linebreak, particularly in the early part of the collection with 2, 5, 6 and 12. I also reckoned that some of the latter pieces, 17, 19, 21 and maybe 26, were lacking something extra to turn the image into something more.

The second was one of my favourites despite it 'missing' a linebreak. The white world of misted glasses is very familiar to me, and well depicted indeed. I also liked 24 and 28 very very much, the former because I love cats of course, and love the way you picked out that begging behaviour so well, and the latter because of the way you show the sharp spire digging into the rain clouds. They were just a select few of a very competant collection indeed though.

Well done once again on finishing. I will catch up I promise. :~)
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moyanII Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
winter is way out for singaporeans, but fortunately i have a rather cooperative weather this year. it was a little colder and wetter than usual. as my day 14 implies, it is considered 'very cold' if it reaches twenty-two degree celcius at daybreak.
i thought i did better my last haikuwrimo with summer as the theme.

i tend to write two-liners due to the influence of japanese kireji 'ya' and 'kana'. i section the verse according to the position of the kireji in the japanese originals. i will ponder over those verses you suggested for more line-breaks.

as for adding more to make the verse tell more, i guess i am under a great constraint of the japanese 17 onji. it can only tell so much with usually 4-6 words. i wish i could squeeze in more, but then it will become an essay according to haiku standard. in order to be truthful in translation, the english versions are just as brief.
i don't think i am capable of changing the verses in this aspect.

thank you for the critiques. they are most appreciated. :)
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somnomollior Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2009   Writer
#21 is a lovely picture of the sharing of a special moment between friends.
#22 the red flowers bring this alive.
#23 the image of the cat glows in the haiku as it does in the reality.
#24 I know the feeling. Do the cats ever trip you up?
#25 Is funny because we have all had one of those kinds of pimples.
#27 Watch out pigeons. The word sparkling suggests very well the cat's intentions.
#28 Graze is a great word in this one. A strong way to finish.
Hurray we did it!
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moyanII Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
day 24: if you ever heard me crippled from a fall it must these three cats... -_-
!!hooray again for completion!!
i'll probably take another year to go through the offerings of other participants. :faint:
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somnomollior Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2009   Writer
I am trying to go through everybody's haiku a few people at a time - otherwise it is too overwhelming, you are right.
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KorpiHunaja Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2009   Writer
twentytwo: lovely.
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b1gfan Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2009  Student Writer
27 is delicious - it seems to be an image that's (no pun intended) in the air as we turn toward spring.
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HaikuKitty Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
A fuzzy moon... Love, love, love this image......

24 - the English version feels off to me- I bet it sings.... :nod:

18 - I was in theater and I know what this means - I was there, done that..... Excellent! :clap:

tangerines, razed, pyramid of cats... Yep, I see it, hear it, feel it.
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moyanII Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
day 24: they are awful singers...
day 18: i did that so often that i hesitate to watch weepy movie again. it's such a waste of resources! think of the water (tears i shed) and the trees that were chopped down (the tissue papers i used)!
day 12: :lol: pyramid of cats!! nah, they didn't manage to get that silly yet. at least i didn't get to see that with my eyes.
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somnomollior Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2009   Writer
I really like the picture that comes to my mind from reading the line about the tiger cat wrestling the stuffed toy.
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KorpiHunaja Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2009   Writer
seventeen: great, an ode to spicy food. :)
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b1gfan Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2009  Student Writer
Yea! for 19 :) I feel the immediacy of it.
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KorpiHunaja Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2009   Writer
i wish my slacking would be that productive. couldn't call it slacking then, could i? :)
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moyanII Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
slacking from haikumania but busy drawing. =p but i still managed to come out with a japanese 5-7-5 counterpart for #16. (though i won't call that thing 'haiku';) :lol:
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Amimone Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2009
Every haiku in this is a jewel and there is much to absorb and think from each one of them. I enjoyed thoroughly number 13 - what a great image it is giving me :giggle:
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moyanII Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
yes, #13 makes me giggle each time i read it again. :giggle:
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Amimone Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2009
I wonder if I could see the future on a bald head... :evillaugh:
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moyanII Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
:rofl: i imagine divinating by a bald head hardly tell much good news. :rofl:
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somnomollior Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2009   Writer
"weightless scent" sounds delightful.
And jolly nice wolves they are too! :D
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moyanII Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
thank you! :D
the wolves are fun to draw. maybe i should do a series... :XD:
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Elmara Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2009  Student Writer
my favs were 1, 3, 10 and 12. your imagery is astounding in its complexity and brevity. :wow:
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Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Beautiful haiku. What is the head-throbbing lion dance of #9?
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moyanII Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
have you read the artist comment section? there's a link that explains lion dance.
basically, the din from the lion dance gave me headache. :XD:
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b1gfan Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2009  Student Writer
15 is rich in bonsai potential :)
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somnomollior Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2009   Writer
#11 Always like to see works of art referencing other works of art!
I also like the bald head description of the moon in #13.
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KorpiHunaja Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2009   Writer
ten: your explaination made me think of issa's: yugao no, hana de hana kamu, musume kana. i have no english translation at hand though.

fourteen: sometimes in winter (february) we have temperatures near that too, but around midday.

maybe it's just me, but i feel that number symbols shouldn't be put in romanji haiku... i'd word it out.
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moyanII Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
your romanji version of issa's might have some miss. i can't really figure it out. i guess it is talking a girl who's smelling the scent of a morning glory blossom...

i should have used symbol of 'degree' for the english counterpart of #14 but i don't know how to type that. :XD:
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KorpiHunaja Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2009   Writer
perhaps... it should be about a little girl that sneezed into a flower. or wiped her nose in it...

22°C: 22, ctrl-alt 5, C. at least on my laptop. :P
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moyanII Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
the typing method doesn't work on my keyboard but i can copy and paste what you have just typed. :P
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b1gfan Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2009  Student Writer
There is no other word for it - the tangerine image is succulent :D
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somnomollior Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2009   Writer
The delicate balance of the image in #8 mirrors the delicate balance of the art of haiku.
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b1gfan Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2009  Student Writer
how did our nose become so red?
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moyanII Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
why oh why? :XD:
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Bogbrush Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2009
It's always a pleasure to read your work :) and three brings back wonderful memories :)
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moyanII Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
3 is my favorite so far.
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goldstone-glitter Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2009

:heart: Six and Nine.

Simple yet inspiring visual poetry.
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TimeFlies Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2009
I agree with korpi on number 2, and it took that to remind me that you are in singapore which is the key that unlocks that haiku!

And, like Jade, I too love 8. It's fantastic :)
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jade-pandora Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2009
elegant and perfectly visual in loveliness -- your #8 -- my favorite of yours to date. :frail:
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moyanII Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
you mean this #8 is your favorite of all haiku i've written so far?
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jade-pandora Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2009
ah dear one -

I mean that at the time I made the comment, your #8 was my favorite in this your winter wrimo. It certainly won't be my only favorite once the month has ended. :heart:

I look forward to you visiting when your able - I enjoy your thoughts, so unique to anyone else's. How far I've come from the first wrimo I ever participated in - and already had the honor of your art and one of my humble haiku paired in your wonderful card game project! I keep my deck in my nightstand, protected and yet easy for me to reach when I want to look at the cards and be reminded of the wonderful haijin who participated back then - some of them not active here anymore.
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SOLARTS Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2009
I like #8 a lot - lovely image.

:)
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b1gfan Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2009  Student Writer
The fair goddess moon is getting a good going over in these winter haiku from everyone involved in the WriMo :) I like the poise she shows in your 8th day piece :D
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Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
So beautiful - I adore #5...
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somnomollior Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2009   Writer
'north-facing' is a good word - it makes it sound like the side of Everest.
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b1gfan Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2009  Student Writer
I like the suggestion of a one-sided numbness. It's evocative :D
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somnomollior Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2009   Writer
#4 I hope it wasn't too annoying and you got some sleep. It is funny though. I like how you call it singing! :D
#5 and #6 both pleasing, spare images.
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