kaeriji ya namiki no ojigi ukeni nari
the trees lined up
to welcome me--
Lovely image there, reminds me of the tree-lined streets I used to walk along going home from school
The concept is a very fresh one.
Now this is brilliant. Well done!
Gotta love those trees, lovely haiku.
Very nice job conveying the sense of "home". I just adore those tree-lined lanes.