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木洩れ日を浴びた君との昨夏かな
komorebi wo abita kimi to no sakka kana

light sifted through the leaves
sprinkled upon you,
last summer.
haikuwrimo day 6

this year there is only me.
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:iconirvon:
There is nothing as beautiful as trees in this world. You managed to really capture the way trees are in the summer with this piece:)
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:iconbogbrush:
That is both beautiful and sad. I'll also admit to loving the light when it shines through leaves.
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:iconesin:
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superb writing, dear!
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:iconmoyanii:
moyanII Oct 7, 2007  Hobbyist Writer
thank you! :)
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:iconmrsvelvetears:
:) This was incredibly sweet. I love the image of light through the leaves, and the last line was so sad. :+favlove:
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:iconzephyrchaser:
I can't say much beyond what everyone else already has -- I agree!
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:iconwolf-with-a-pen:
Wow! This is superb! The accompanying image is just wonderful!
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:icondebdatta:
Its beautiful. The image presented is lovely.

Great work! Keep it up! :)
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:icona-random-quigle:
I like this one particularly... beautiful image... nostalgic with a touch of sadness.
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:icongorghte:
The light when it is broken up by trees or clouds is at it's most beautiful. The rays of light stand out and just make you want to smile and feel happy.

This is a really good haiku.
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