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Expensive NicetiesExpensive Niceties

Let’s spend all we have
‘Cause pain is so expensive
Do we have enough cash?

A shadow, a ghost,
form hidden within layers
of aging fabric.

A city doorway is all
the shelter she can hope for.

1.Social phobia;
n. My efforts drowning as
I smile in a cage.

Winter Left MeThe sounds of laughter,
And the four strong cooled spring winds,
Are drifting through me
Like a hollow conch that sings
Of winter's abandonment.

Haiku #2Bright summer glistens,
As ominous clouds threaten
Light that spews darkness

RageI'd like to punch her.
Make the empty words stop. I'm
crazy am I not?

Why I like HaikusFinite words to use.
Such limitations can cause.
Infinite Beauty.

Sunset's lovely redI see that red hue
Floating towards the twilight sky
On a cold sunset

Haiku #3Spring’s downpour beckons,
Promising chasm instantly
Abstracted and bare

False SubtletiesLipstick hangs like blood
on her lips - she smiles, eyes dance
behind masked exterior
of decaying skin
that droops the edges of her
eyes like secret masquerade.

Have at meKick me while I'm down
I'll laugh and spit blood at you
A fair trade I say

ObsessionPreoccupation

Compulsive, irrational

Excessive nature.

HumanidadHumanidad,
El verdadero cancer
de la actualidad

ReflectionAcrid misery,
It’s just people killing all
There is no virus

(We are)

A Haiku on HumanityJust like the flowers
Bloom and die, so does the love
Humanity gives.

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木洩れ日を浴びた君との昨夏かな
komorebi wo abita kimi to no sakka kana

light sifted through the leaves
sprinkled upon you,
last summer.

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Miss You

by *moyanII, Oct 5, 2007, 4:45:08 PM
Literature / Poetry / Human Nature / Haiku & Eastern

木洩れ日を浴びた君との昨夏かな
komorebi wo abita kimi to no sakka kana

light sifted through the leaves
sprinkled upon you,
last summer.

Miss Youby *moyanII

Literature / Poetry / Human Nature / Haiku & Eastern

©2007-2013 *moyanII

haikuwrimo day 6

this year there is only me.

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~irvon Oct 8, 2007

There is nothing as beautiful as trees in this world. You managed to really capture the way trees are in the summer with this piece

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*Bogbrush Oct 7, 2007

That is both beautiful and sad. I'll also admit to loving the light when it shines through leaves.

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~Esin Oct 6, 2007

superb writing, dear!

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*moyanII Oct 7, 2007 Hobbyist Writer

thank you!

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~mrsvelvetears Oct 6, 2007 Writer

This was incredibly sweet. I love the image of light through the leaves, and the last line was so sad.

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~zephyrchaser Oct 6, 2007 Writer

I can't say much beyond what everyone else already has -- I agree!

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~Wolf-with-a-pen Oct 6, 2007

Wow! This is superb! The accompanying image is just wonderful!

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~Debdatta Oct 6, 2007

Its beautiful. The image presented is lovely.

Great work! Keep it up!

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*a-random-quigle Oct 6, 2007

I like this one particularly... beautiful image... nostalgic with a touch of sadness.

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Mood: Joy

~Gorghte Oct 5, 2007

The light when it is broken up by trees or clouds is at it's most beautiful. The rays of light stand out and just make you want to smile and feel happy.

This is a really good haiku.

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