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木洩れ日を浴びた君との昨夏かな
komorebi wo abita kimi to no sakka kana

light sifted through the leaves
sprinkled upon you,
last summer.
haikuwrimo day 6

this year there is only me.
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irvon Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2007
There is nothing as beautiful as trees in this world. You managed to really capture the way trees are in the summer with this piece:)
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Bogbrush Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2007
That is both beautiful and sad. I'll also admit to loving the light when it shines through leaves.
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Esin Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2007
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superb writing, dear!
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moyanII Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2007  Hobbyist Writer
thank you! :)
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mrsvelvetears Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2007   Writer
:) This was incredibly sweet. I love the image of light through the leaves, and the last line was so sad. :+favlove:
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zephyrchaser Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2007   Writer
I can't say much beyond what everyone else already has -- I agree!
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Wolf-with-a-pen Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2007
Wow! This is superb! The accompanying image is just wonderful!
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Debdatta Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2007
Its beautiful. The image presented is lovely.

Great work! Keep it up! :)
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a-random-quigle Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2007
I like this one particularly... beautiful image... nostalgic with a touch of sadness.
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Gorghte Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2007
The light when it is broken up by trees or clouds is at it's most beautiful. The rays of light stand out and just make you want to smile and feel happy.

This is a really good haiku.
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