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**

No stars in the day,
they might have all fallen
to the water.

**
Let's look at the lake.

yanchep national park, perth. september 2002.
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RetroZombie Featured By Owner May 12, 2006
Another gem! I'm amazed that more people aren't commenting - these poems are wonderful!

I have no constructive criticism to offer, though - you are far beyond me in skill!
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AngelaD Featured By Owner May 6, 2006
Very pretty! Gives me a lovely image of a pond with the sun reflecting!
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moyanII Featured By Owner May 7, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
your comment inspires me. i've changed the preview pic to another photo i took during a spring trip to perth, australia.
and i've found new inspiration to write, not about japan trip but on perth's spring. thank you! :hug:
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AngelaD Featured By Owner May 7, 2006
:D
I like that preview pic too!

You're welcome, I'm glad I could inspire you! :hug:
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moyanII Featured By Owner May 6, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
light's reflection and the specks of sakura petals too :)
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MSJames Featured By Owner May 6, 2006
Oh very nice =moyan ! You drew me a picture with words and with paint! :)
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moyanII Featured By Owner May 6, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
look like i am more to Buson's sect in writing haiku...^^;
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MSJames Featured By Owner May 6, 2006
Ah yes, I can see the resemblance, although I'm sure you're cuter! ;)
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moyanII Featured By Owner May 7, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
:o
how do you know? have you seen Buson or me before? lol
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MSJames Featured By Owner May 7, 2006
Just a good guess.... ;)
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moyanII Featured By Owner May 7, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
nah =p not a good guess.
i've changed something on my may 6th haiku, please come and look at it again!
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MSJames Featured By Owner May 7, 2006
I see that you did!

Hmmm, I don't remember the other one, but I like this one okay. The leading ellipse has me a bit confused though. I like the idea, but the execution still seems a bit clumbsy. (sorry) The idea is a very good one though! :)
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moyan Featured By Owner May 7, 2006  Professional General Artist
i didn't change the writing, only the description and the preview pic. ^^;
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