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SilentiumTranquility in
A motionless lake wherein
Lay silent ripples
PrisonerThe prisoners in
cages of sadness. What if
it was us instead?
Haiku - Springtime!
Hope is in the air

                    The wonders of creation

                                              Can you hear feel the warmth?
*Love of Flowers*Perfumed breezes stir
Like potpourri on the wind
Faint whisper of love.

2013 Delice1941
21st May2013
TimeRiver flows frozen
Birds like to dance in the sky
Another year past
Nightthe moon is outside
water rushes from the sky
my universe cries
NightThe darkness of night
Made complete obscurity,
Then comes daylight.
Seasonal HaikuA sparkling moon:
Shimmering in the water,
A glittering eye.

I feel the wind blow—
Blushing bright autumn colours
Turning of new leaves.

Frothy white waves soothe
Troubled minds. I scrunch my toes—
It’s too cold this year...
LavenderLavender smoke drifts
Burning sweetly in my pipe
I am calm, at peace
Tick TockTick Tock Tick Tock Tick
Hours Seconds Minutes Life
Tick Tock Tick Tock Stop
Haiku/NoteGlistering morning dew
Shining in sticky cobwebs
Dew like little pearls

for the ones who don't know
a haiku is:
line #1: 5 syllables
line #2: 7 syllables
line #3: 5 syllables

and I had to use two devices.
Fish Haiku**************************************
Blue Fighter

Flowing silken veil
Blue deeper than midnight sky
Fierce fighting fish flares

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Red Jester

Satin red sparks blue
Merry dancing flutter fins
Dart with joyful play

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Bowl

Circle round once more
Perhaps it is different now...
Infinite glass wall

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Pond

Shining gold shimmer
Twinkles beneath the water
Glinting beyond reach

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Ein Herbstblatt im Wind Ein Ein Herbstblatt im Wind

Ein Herbstblatt im Wind
Der Ruf des blauen Vogels
Zeit für den Süden
Haiku on Fallen Cherry BlossomsPink snow swirling in
gay circles across the road--
spring's wintry cosplay.
The Moon And The StarsThe Moon and The Stars,
Shine brightly and glow tonight.
The dark night cold, alone.

The Moon And The Stars
Mars Wilson
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汗たっぷり二十二人とボール一個
ase tappuri nijuuni nin to booru ikko

covered in sweat--
twenty-two men
and one ball.
Harmony
木洩れ日や砕かれ蔭か千切れた陽
komorebi ya kudakare kage ka chigereta hi

that which descends from the leaves--
fragmented shadow or shredded light?
Silhouette
飛ぶ鳥や木の影一片去りにけり
tobutori ya ki no kage ippen sari ni keri

the tree
shed a shred of shadow--
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雨漏りに叩かれ岩も凹みなり
amamori ni tatakare iwa mo hekominari

Raindrops from eaves
dimpled the rock.
Aquarium
左右上下魚は飼い主の真似をする
sayuu jouka uo wa kainushi no mane wo suru

left right up down,
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幼子や何も恐れぬ戦人
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the bravest warriors
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children.

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Garden version 4

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Tranquil white explosions frozen in the air
fill my visions.

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:iconmoyanii:
still struggling to keep up with Haikuwrimo, and having a good time recalling my spring trip to Japan. It all comes back to me. :)

kamakura, japan. april 1997.
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~AngelaD May 6, 2006
You don't seem to be struggling! A different but fitting description of the blossoms, very cool that you have your own preview pics to enhance your haiku!!
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*moyanII May 6, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
thanks! the preview pics are all taken in the trip.
i am really struggling, believe me. i run out of idea to write for today :/
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~AngelaD May 6, 2006
You're welcome!

Maybe tomorrow will bring a new ideas!!
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`AbCat May 5, 2006   Writer
Is it snow?
If it is snow, 'explosion' is a great word for a snowflake.
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*moyanII May 5, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
it's sakura T^T
i thought the action of sakura 'fiercely' blossoming fits 'explosions'.
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`AbCat May 6, 2006   Writer
I've never actually seen a sakura blossom. I like the idea of white petals being frozen. Excellent.
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*moyanII May 6, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
something like what is shown in the preview pic for the poem :)
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`AbCat May 6, 2006   Writer
Beautiful. Just how I imagined it after reading so many haiku on it.
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`MSJames May 5, 2006
I'm glad you're keeping up and I love your memories and your haiku! :) I did notice that you're not providing the original japanes on this one! ;)

Now, on to the haiku....

I think it would read better thusly...

Tranquil, white
explosions frozen in the air
fill my vision.

Just my opinion though. :)
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*moyanII May 5, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
not providing the japanese ones because i do not have one. =p
the line breaks hmmm... i am not good at that, will polish it up when i have time.
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